People hate me after I review their website or they think I'm a total troll. Either way I will say what I say.
I tell every one this and no one listens because they think they have a cool website. Users HATE FLASH /SLIDESHOW websites. Automated web sites make me want to throw my computer out the window. No seriously, studies have shown that a nicely designed website with little or no flash is preferred by most web users. The slideshows are useful once I've navigated to a gallery, but not before. I don't want to see all that crap. I'm looking for information and not looking to be entertained.
Your website gives the impression that you've only ever done one wedding, that of some fat woman and her over weight hubby to be. (Sorry to be so blunt). My system is calibrated, maybe poorly calibrated, but calibrated. Many of your images look to be blown out. Blowing out a portion of some images can be artsy but your images just look blown out to me. Even worse, a fair number of the images look to be wrongly focused or completely soft.
Your about page says that you've been practicing photography for 3 years, when you get it right, come back. No I'm not being that critical but you need to rethink saying that. It's also pretty terrible that your portrait is credited to a different photographer. Can't you do your own
PR shoots.
I don't know about LA but around here people would find your rates astronomical; especially the extremely small number of prints in the offered albums. I think most people expect the album to run at least 100 pages. My doctor boosted that he had over 2000 images of his daughters wedding. Your offering 18 prints and basically half a day or less with no reception included. WOW, I hope you already have a reputation for doing great work. I wouldn't be coming to you anytime soon. Are these packages really competitive ? Only the well established , word of mouth guys can charge that much around here.
I had to hit the pricing tab at least 3 times before your slideshow stopped long enough to show me the wedding pricing page. And I hate to scroll to see information. Reconsider that huge picture and such a small text box.
One last thing, the entry page is a disaster. I had to view it at 75% to see it all on a high resolution screen. It's way too large, reduce the size of the entry page to no more than 1024 width and 760 high. Little irritations make the competition seem better.
I have a professional background in user interface design for software and web interfaces.
Charles