Original Flower of Africa ~ Deon

This is a discussion on Original Flower of Africa ~ Deon within the People Photography forums, part of the PHOTO GALLERIES category; This is Deon, I personally find this model really charming. She is the first African I have ever shot. #1 DEON #2 #3 #4 Oriental ...


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    This is Deon, I personally find this model really charming. She is the first African I have ever shot.

    #1 DEON

    #2

    #3

    #4 Oriental Fusion

    C & C welcome, please be harsh as possible, I want to learn

    EXIF
    #1 – 1/125, f2.8, ISO 1600, 50 mm
    #2 – 1/100, f4.0, ISO 1600, 50 mm
    #3 – 1/125, f5.0, ISO 1600, 50 mm
    #4 – 1/125, f2.8, ISO 1600, 50 mm


    Self criticism:
    #2 – Uninteresting Space on the right
    #4 – Too much deadspace on the left, would be nice if showed more of the model


    Sorry about the small pictures, got bigger ones here



    Artistic Side of Things

    I am mainly here for technical improvement but please allow me the opportunity to share a little bit about my actual work.

    All these photos that I posted all along are actually from my invention of an article that I hope can help us, through pictures and words, understand another person to a certain degree.

    The full article for Deon can be found here

    After reading the article and looking at the photos, please try to use all of the emotions and impressions generated by them to, in your mind, reconstruct an individual. If what you have constructed in your mind is at least 10 % of the real person then my experimental article is on the right track.
    I would be grateful for any feedback at all as they are valuable for my experiment’s progress. Thank you ;-)


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    3rd shot... wow. love it.
    Michael Scott Sandberg

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    Quote Originally Posted by michaelscott03 View Post
    3rd shot... wow. love it.
    I'm really glad you do =) thank you !


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