Please critique..

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  1. #1

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    Here it is- Thanks for your feedback.

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    Very nice

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    Very nice. Amazing colors! I want to see more of your work, where can I see more?

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    The colors are nice and overall I like the composition. Great choice of exposure.

    I have two minor critiques. First, I would either like to see more...or less, of the fall. Because the lines almost lead to a point, it leaves me looking to see where it goes. I feel kind of robbed

    Second, the large rock in the fg. I think it's placed perfectly in the frame. But, it's just a little too bright. Because it's so prominent, it draws my eye away from the fall.
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  • #6

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    Thanks for the feedback everyone.

    Studio107- I don't really have anymore at this point! This is my first go of it. Thank you for your compliments. I will post more soon.

    mynameisjake- Thanks for the pointers. Being a newbie, they help out a lot.

    I look forward to more C&C from you guys.
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    I like the quality of light & the colors in the photo !! Has been exposed quite well !!
    But have to agree with mynameisjake, about the eye feeling left out in the middle !!
    I would have preferred not to cut the nearest ROCK at the left of the frame.
    It is a bit too close, and hence doesn't allow the eye to actually judge the depth of the scene.
    Closer objects are used by the eye for comparison with others in the scene to judge depth.


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