Venice. Evening

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    Venice. Evening

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    Very nice. Is this a film capture?
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    Really difficult to find anything to complain about with this shot. I like the composition, the exposure, and the setting. Excellent job!

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    The composition is nice, but if this were my photo I would add contrast, wait for a more interesting/dramatic sky, use a longer exposure to smooth out the water, and place a foreground element. Ideally one wants to have a background, middle ground, foreground. I feel like foreground is missing - maybe wait for the boat to get closer? To me, this photograph says "you have been there" rather than "I want to be there".

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    Nice Shot!

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    thank you much, very interesting and kind criticism. No, not a scanned film (I like film and I use large format camera), but here was an hand held 24X36 from the ferryboat....
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    Dreamy image. Superb black and white editing!
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    Definitely needs more contrast but otherwise ok

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    Noticed all your posts today. Keep in mind you are replying to posts many years old whose member no longer visit. For better use of your time and others post images that can be commented on.

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    ah this composition is great! love the black and white feel to it, nothing i can outright see that needs to be adjusted. I think you've done a pretty good job with the composition here. Maybe just a slight amount of increase in contrast but other than that.. all good! keep it up.


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