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    Landscape

    First timer, gimme all you got if its constructive I wanna hear it. Glad to have found the forum.

    Thanks in advance


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    Welcome to the forum! That's a nice image you've posted; as for critique, I think cutting it in half would make it much stronger. I would suggest a vertical crop removing the left half (approximately) and leaving just the tree, rocks and snow. The sunrise colours behind the mountain image left are nice enough, but they're not really strong enough to hold the eye, whereas the bright foreground snow creates a perfect leading line to the tree. This would also get the horizon out of the middle of the image which usually isn't the most desirable. I suspect you were trying to incorporate the rule of thirds into your composition, but in this case, I don't think it worked to advantage.
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    I gave it a bit of a go here we are

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    I like subject and composition. Only I find a little generic and flat the snow colour and tone. Not good IMHO the lack of focus of high part of subject.
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    I'd crop off the bottom 20% of the DaveM's photo.

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    I think the original image is the best crop...
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    Check the date or action of posts you are answering. This one is a couple years old and the guy is not around any more.

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    It just doesn't pop!

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    Awesome picture reflect the true beauty of the nature.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rvmitraphotography View Post
    Awesome picture reflect the true beauty of the nature.

    Pay attention to the date of the post. The guy showed up once left his request and never returned. 3 YEARS AGO.


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