Help Needed

[kassemwalied]

Hey i need some comments on how i can improve these images
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[Dyflam]

Maybe just a crop to get rid of uninteresting content...

[wini]

I like #1. Yes, a little of upper right could be cropped. In #2, what does lower right add to shot?

[marionet]

#1 could have a different third crop if you darken the background. But good use of selective color.



I think about the main hope for #2 would be a re-shoot at an earlier or later time of day- when the sun is low. I honestly don't know what this picture is about- my eye seems to be getting jerked around uncomfortably; not in a pleasant exploring way. The glaring light tans are uncomfortable.

[kassemwalied]

Thank you very much for the photo comments guys
I'll be sure to do these edits

[clupica]

#1 The flower doesn't have enough depth of field and looks a bit soft (not in sharp focus)
#2 The foreground (subject) is too dark. It would be better to blow out the background than to have the foreground look as though it's in shadow.

Charles